CONTACTS 

SUBJECTS
SDS Marketing Advertizing
POIMS/SDS Presentation Schematic
Product definition

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0506 - Summary/Objective
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050701 - Completed language on Subject Index.  Made a new version, so the
050702 - order of this one is saved.  The new one changes the layout of the
050703 - thing.  Spell checked it.
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0510 - Progress
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051101 - Completed the language and revised the organization.  Millie reviewed
051102 - it this evening, and commented as follows:
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051104 -     1.  Intellectual capital is not defined on page 1.
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051106 -     2.  Too much bold and italics.
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051108 -     3.  Asked a lot of questions about "How" SDS accomplishes its
051109 -         features, and requests examples.
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051111 -           This suggests we need to do a seminar to answer questions
051112 -           about how SDS does it thing.
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051114 -     4.  Suggests emphasizing that SDS records contain personal
051115 -         knowledge and ideas.
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051117 -           This is mentioned on page 1, defining POIMS, but maybe we
051118 -           need to say it again on page 2.
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051120 -     5.  Wants to clarify that SDS entails "computerized notes".
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051122 -           This seems self evident, since SDS is a computer program.
051123 -           Part of this concern seems defensive.
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0514 - 2253 : Rewrite
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051501 - I incorporated some of Millie's ideas.  Added an explanation of
051502 - "intellectual capital" on page two, so there is some reinforcement on
051503 - this point.
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