Mr. R. Max Wideman
I still think you could add a summary at the end that simply states the key 8 points you want to get across - what you want the reader to do or infer from the dissertation.
Also, you might add much the same thing as an 'Abstract' or Executive Summary' 8 at the beginning like a formal paper (though I would not use either of those headings.) Maybe something like -
You might want to run a spell checker on the text and double check the wording of the links in the initial list of 15 compared to what you now have in the body of the text.
Sincerely,
M.
Vancouver, Canada
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